Thursday, 20 October 2011

Thalassa

Sorry for delay in putting more stuff on this blog.  Here is a stort which I may well use as the start of a novel - what do you think?  (Copyright as usual)


Thalassa

Thalassa smiled.  Today was the day of her Enthronement, the day when she received the Torque, symbol of the totality of her power in Anardill.  Since the Sisters had preferred her over the others who were eligible on the death of the last Matriarch, she had of course, ruled, but today she would be seated on the Chair of Judgement, presented with the Torque, and the whole world would know her power.

She walked down the lines of representatives from many countries, here for the Ceremony.  To her distress many lands had sent men, despite the widespread knowledge of the customs of Anardill, of her land.  Of course, Ambassadors, who could reside here for years, were all female, with men kept for subservient or menial roles, as was right.  But some still allowed their barbarism to show by sending male representatives to her Enthronement!

Nevertheless she smiled and nodded courteously, moving at a steady pace, the heavy brocade with its gold thread embroidery helping her do so.  She would have to get used to this – no more running like a fercat through the courtyards, cellars and attics of the palace complex.

Now she was on the wide balcony overlooking the city square. The square was crowded with her subjects, the women prominent with their hair piled up elaborately in honour of the occasion.  Some had men with them as bodyguards – a job their bulk made them suitable for. The other men kept demurely to the edge of the square, bare heads bowed modestly, left arms loosely attached to their tunics, a reminder of the old days when men, because of their innate bodily strength and vicious tendencies, had to be physically restrained.  Nowadays, naturally, no civilised man of Anardill would think of challenging a woman.  But they made good soldiers – under female officers, it went without saying – and male bodyguards added prestige, and even, occasionally, safety, with so many foreigners living in the city. 
                    …………………………………………………

Later, toward the end of the State Banquet, her Chief Advisor, Terchet, approached her.  Thalassa fought down a feeling of nervousness – now, Terchet was hers to command, not She-Who-Must-Be-Obeyed.  But the years of training, of subservience to the older woman, were not easily put aside.  And the nervousness was compounded by the knowledge of why she had come.  Because of what came next, Thalassa had eaten sparingly, and drunk only wine enough to speed the blood, not slow the mind.

Terchet bowed.  “My Lady, the chosen males are assembled in the Holding Room.  Now is the hour appointed by the astrologers.  If you would come to make your choice?”

As they made their way down the long corridors and wide staircases toward the room at the back of the ground floor, Terchet spoke.  “My Lady, we have selected ten. They have been rigorously examined, and their bloodlines investigated. They have been put through the tests for their physical attributes, and have bested others in the arena. They are well trained socially, and their mental qualities are as high as one can expect in any of the male sex – sufficient, anyway, that they will not hold back the intelligence that any child will inherit from you.  As to looks – we have tried for a variety of outward appearances, representative of the varied provinces of this land, and all, I think I may say, are sufficiently handsome that spending the necessary time with them will be no hardship.”

Thalassa nodded graciously, hoping to hide her embarrassment.  It was one thing discussing all this with the other Candidates amongst giggles and nudges, but quite another to hear the calm, measured tones of her Chief Advisor talking of male attractions.

“If I may, my Lady, presume to offer some advice?”  When Thalassa nodded again, Terchet carried on.  “Look carefully at Grinzig – he’s the southerner, with his hair worn in their traditional queue.  His family is excellent, he has proved his fertility in his home city, he has served as a soldier so would bring the necessary vitality into the royal line…and he is not unattractive.”

“How old is he?  A father already you say?  So he is not a virgin?”

“He is thirty-five summers old.  A little older than you might wish, perhaps.”

“He is more than twice my age,” said Thalassa sharply.  “But he has other good points, I acknowledge. We will see.”

The female officers saluted smartly and opened the heavy wooden doors.  Ten males stood there, guarded by two more officers.  At a command from one of them, the men knelt, heads bowed.  Terchet indicated that the doors should be shut, then stood with her back against them. Thalassa slowly paced along the line then spoke. “Stand up men: I can hardly judge you when all I can see is the tops of your heads!”

When they were all standing again, she looked up and down the line with a feeling of vague disappointment.  They were all so…malleable, so obedient, so spiritless.  So unlike those in the Romances smuggled into the Training Palace from over the borders, or via the port.  She could see what Terchet meant about Grinzig, she supposed, but even with the wine in her, he did not set her blood coursing.

Then her eyes saw the figure at the end of the line.  He was darker than the others, and, although dressed in the customary robes, he looked different – his hair was a little wild, and his eyes were looking at her in a most immodest way.  “What is that one’s name?” she asked Terchet.  “Where is he from?”

Tercet’s lips narrowed.  “I apologise, my Lady.  He is from one of the mountain tribes, included for political reasons, to placate them as they are restless at the moment.  Unfortunately, they are infected with some of the heretical ideas from over the border.  He will be well whipped for his impertinence in looking at you.”

“I asked you his name.”
“Something totally unpronounceable.  But as he is almost as untameable as a fercat, we have given him the soubriquet of Kitling. But he need concern you no longer. If Grinzig does not take your fancy, the islander is attractive.”

“No,” said Thalassa, and smiled at the mountain man – not much more than a lad, really, about her age. To Terchet’s horror, he grinned back… and…was that a wink?  “No, having given it due consideration, I choose Kitling.”

She turned to find out what the noise was.  Terchet had slumped to the floor in a deep swoon.

Thalassa smiled.


Saturday, 16 July 2011

Tom Dick and Harry


Tom, Dick and Harry.

Through the forest the old man shuffles,
With his pig, in search of truffles.
They’ve both done this time out of mind:
But now old Tom is all but blind…
And near Tom’s gate young Richard’s lurking –
A lad who hates all thought of working.
He’s stolen since he was a boy
His feckless lifestyle brings him joy.
“It’s so easy – knock Tom down,
Then sell the truffles in the town:
He can find them first for me:
So simple now he cannot see!”
Tom’s home is on the forest’s edge,
Behind a somewhat straggly hedge,
And there young Richard lies in wait.
He sees Tom opening the gate,
And knocks him down, his cries he muffles,
And then he runs off with the truffles.
Bur Tom’s pig, Harry, saves the day –
He hardly needs old Tom to say
“Go, get him boy!”  - he’s off so quick,
And soon knocks over hapless Dick.
Now Richard lies upon his back,
Sprawled winded, right across the track.
Then Harry to the village trots,
And, at his squealing, from their plots
And houses rush the village folk,
Who all regard it as a joke
That Harry Pig’s defeated Dick!
They gather up Tom’s truffles quick,
And check old Tom has not been hurt –
(He’s fine, if covered all in dirt).
Embarrassed, Richard slinks away
He’s not been heard of since that day.
Then someone say’s “Lets have a feast,
To celebrate this noble beast!”
And so they party long that night,
And dance, and laugh, and get quite tight.
Then to the town the tale they carry:
Of Tom, bad Dick, and hero Harry!

This was an exercise in which we had to include 3 characters, one blind, and Truffles! The verse option was totally my own decision


Copyright

Just to make things clear: all writing published on this blog is copyrighted to Elizabeth Horrocks

The Dark Space

This is now due out this autumn - the second author proof reading having taken place!

Sunday, 15 May 2011

Trilogy Latest

  I also said I'd keep you up-to-date with the Edge of Doom Trilogy, so, below is a summary of the trilogy's progress:

The Edge of Doom was published February 2010 and is available from the outlets listed on the "Getting Hold of a Copy" page.

The contract for The Dark Space (second in trilogy)  has just (February 2011) been signed with the publishers - Peagasus.

The New Found Land
(third in trilogy) is about one fifth written (February 2011).

Latest (May 2011)The Dark Space has come to me from the publishers, after its first proof reading, for my input.  They describe it as "fast-paced and well-written", with "excellent" strudture,plot and style, which is encouraging!

Sisters, Sisters...

Sorry for the delay - life has been busy!  The second in The Edge of Doom Trilogy has come back , proof read, for my input, and I've also been away a lot.  But here is a story, based on a picture  of 2 women standing holding their babies, that was on the internet. We were all given one as stimulus material, so I nothing  about the women in real life.



                                   Sisters, Sisters…

Louise hoped Suzy would be in a good mood.  You could never quite tell with her sister.  But, as asked, she’d brought lots of the family photos with her, so with luck any awkwardness could be glossed over.

However, Suzy looked welcoming when she got there.  After the required embrace and air-kiss, they sat down seemingly quite relaxed, on either side of the small table on which were the teapot and accessories, the cups and the chocolate biscuits.  Dealing with these took some minutes, then a slightly awkward silence seemed on the point of creeping in.

Louise said, hurriedly:  “Lily called in to see us, the other day.  She’s very lovely – reminds me of her mother at that age.  You two are so alike!”

Suzy smiled her somewhat tight smile.  “She came to see me not long ago.  But I was never that attractive.  You’re remembering with younger-sister eyesight.”

“Possibly, said Louise.  “You always seemed so elegant and so grown-up.  Three years makes such a difference in your teens.  That reminds me – I found some old photos.  Do you want to see them?”

“May as well.  What else shall we do?  Go into town for a cup of coffee?”  Suzy’s laugh was a little too wild, Louise thought, and she hastened to get out the photos.
“I put them in some sort of order.  Here’s you, with Mum and Pa.  Before I was born, of course.”

“Of course.  I don’t think there can be any photos of Mum later, except for the one in the hospital, just after.  She died so quickly.”

“Yes.  It must’ve been tough for you – and Pa.  I didn’t miss her of course – had nothing to miss.  All I knew was Pa and Big Sister.  Look, here we are on holiday – North Wales I think.  And this is us at Chester Zoo.”

Thankfully, the pictures had brought some animation to Suzy’s face.   “I remember that!” she said.  “You spoke to the orang-utans as if they were people – just ginger and hairy!”  The pleasure faded in her eyes.  “We seemed happy then.”

“We were – or at least, I was,” said Louise. “You two made me feel so safe…and loved”

“That’s fine, then.”  The acid in Suzy’s voice would have dissolved metal.  Now’s the moment, thought Louise.  If I let it go, I’ll never ask.  I’ll never find out the real reason.

 Keeping her voice deliberately flat, she said:  “You sound as if you weren’t happy then, Suze. Like to tell me about it?  What was wrong?”

For a moment, she thought Suzy wasn’t going to answer, and looked round desperately to locate the bell, as an ugly red flooded her sister’s face. Then  Suzy stood up suddenly and took a step toward the still-seated Louise.  She’d never noticed before how big Suzy’s hands were.  Or how strong – that would be all the gardening she did these days, to the point of obsession, Louise often thought.

But the moment passed.  Suzy sat down, and unexpectedly hid her face in those strong hands, and started to cry.  “It was always you.  The apple of Pa’s eye.  His little darling. To think Aunty Jane told me, years later, that she’d worried that Pa would blame you for Mum’s death – even if it wasn’t strictly true.  No chance!  You were the last bit of her left, and we all cherished you – especially Pa.”

Louise almost said something, but wisely decided on silence.

“And you enchanted us all, without even trying.  Not like me – I tried.  How I tried!  I was Pa’s little helper. I dressed neatly. I worked hard in school.  I did my homework.  I played with you – not that was a problem.  But people didn’t love me just for myself, like they did you…Little Miss Sunshine!”

“But I remember being quite a naughty child.”

“Only added to your charm.”  Suzy’s tears were dry now, matching her tone.  “Oh you are awful…but I like you.. sort of thing.”

“But you went to university…you got a good degree…”

“Yes.  Those were good years.  Pa even got a housekeeper so I could go away.  But I’d have preferred to do Economics, not History, but Pa thought it a deeply unfeminine subject!  And of course I worried about you two and came home as much as I could.  Didn’t do wonders for my social life.”

Louise protested: “But we never asked you to.  We were fine!”

“Oh, I bet you were!  Just Pa and Pa’s darling girl.  What I’d have given to have him smile at me when I arrived from halfway across the country like he’d smile at you when you came back after being out half an hour.”

“But he trusted you, you became his PA. He relied on you. 

Suzy nodded “Oh yes, he did.  But he didn’t…joy in me, like he did in you.  Even when I married Mike.  Of course I was in love, but the fact that he was already lined up by Pa to take over on his retirement helped.  I did so want Pa’s approval.  You, on the other hand…”

She broke off.  Louise knew what wasn’t being said.  She, on the other hand, had dropped out of Uni, had gone travelling, had come back pregnant.  Had come to live with Pa, not noticing that this put Suzy’s nose out of joint.  Instead, she remembered telling her not to come round - trying to save her bringing meals to them, when she too was pregnant.

Suzy was riffling through the photos frantically.  “Where is it?  It must be here!  Of course, you had the boy, Matthew, the heir to the company, whereas I had Lily.  But she was so beautiful, and I dressed her so prettily, and I didn’t try to go back to work. Pa wouldn’t have approved … where is it?  But when you started your painting and decorating business, Pa was happy to baby-sit…here it is!”

Louise looked at the photo of the two of them, both smiling, holding their babies.  “Why is this one so special?” she asked.

“Look, look!”  Suzy was almost screaming now.  “Even when he took this, he couldn’t help himself.  You’re completely there – so’s Matthew.  But all you can see of Mike is his hand, and he’s cut me, and even Lily, down the side.  No wonder I cut him.  He deserved it!”

Louise looked.  Such a little thing to fire the resentments of years.  Such a wonder that it had been Pa, not her or Matt, that had suffered.  She could still see his bloodied body, with Suzy wordlessly standing over him, scissors clasped in hand.

She opened her arms and her sister fell into them, sobbing.  Gently, she sat her back down, and discreetly pressed the bell.  A large woman came in, keys in hand.  “I think my sister needs to rest…” Should she say Nurse, or Officer?  She never knew.

“I’m Alice,” said the woman, smiling.  “Come on, Mrs Farmer.  Let’s get you to your room.

Left behind, she tidied the photos, and, on consideration, decided to take them with her.  Suzy had been so upset – but perhaps, now she’d explained, there was a chance of recovery.

Louise paused on the steps and breathed freedom, as the doors of the Home for the Criminally Insane closed behind her.


Tuesday, 15 March 2011

A Modern Romance

                                      A Modern Romance

June 2010

Email fromTomj Finance@Blackzzipz.co.uk   to   Mandirpa@Blackzzipz.co.uk
Hi!
Alan Ridbridge has asked me to check that Mr Thorson knows about the meeting at 3pm today.
                                             Tom Jameson
PS. Are you the one with the shoulder length hair, wearing the black & yellow dress today?
Email from Mandirpa@Blackzzipz.co.uk   to  Tomj Finance@Blackzzipz.co.uk
Yes, Mr Thorson has remembered the meeting and will be there.
               Lucy  Mandeville (PA to Adam Thorson)
PS. Yes, I am the one you thought I was.  Are you the newish one in accounts?  The one with the sunburnt forehead and nose?

Email fromTomj Finance@Blackzzipz.co.uk   to   Mandirpa@Blackzzipz.co.uk
Yes, that’s me.  Forgot my sun-block when playing cricket at the weekend?  Would you like to hear about it?  Where’s a good place round here for a post-work drink?
                             Tom J
Email from Mandirpa@Blackzzipz.co.uk   to  Tomj Finance@Blackzzipz.co.uk
Silly man!  Was it a good innings, or were you just at third man for a long time? (I have 3 brothers who play, and I open the batting for a woman’s team)
Tell me about it in the Masons, at 5. It’s on the river, 5 mins walk down the hill.
                              Lucy
Text from Tom Jameson to Lucy Mandeville.
Did U really say yes to dinner at w/e?

Text from Lucy Mandeville to Tom Jameson
Yes. Did U say U like Italian?

Text from Tom Jameson to Lucy Mandeville
Yes. Mike (accounts) recommends Pietro’s.

Text from Lucy Mandeville to Tom Jameson
Good choice!

Text from Tom Jameson to Lucy Mandeville
If I knew where U live, I’d pick U up!

Text from Lucy Mandeville to Tom Jameson
Nice try! Meet U there, 7.30 Sat.

Facebook
·        Lucy Mandeville and Tom Jameson are now friends

July 2010
Facebook
·        Lucy Mandeville’s profile has changed to ‘in a relationship’

August 2010: First Week

Email from Lucy137@net.net  to Tomtomj@yahoo.co.uk
How dare you just text me and say you won’t be around for 2 weeks because of a bloody cricket tour?? !!! And I thought you cared!  I’m changing my mobile number, so don’t try ringing or texting!!
                                Lucy
Facebook
·        Lucy is not sure if she’s friends with Tom J!
·        Lucy has changed her Profile to “it’s complicated”

Lucy darling, I’m so sorry.  I felt if I said it to you face to face, and saw your reaction, I might say I wouldn’t go, and let the team, and the lads, and myself, down.  I’m glad I didn’t, and the tour is great (first match tomorrow), But I’ve obviously cocked things up.  Sorry.  Sorry. (And I miss you like hell!)
                                  Tom

Email from Lucy137@net.net  to Tomtomj@yahoo.co.uk
Idiot!  Fool!  I understand about tours, and you should know me well enough to have known that and trusted me It’s an honour to be selected, especially when you’re so new to the team.  My new mobile number is …..
                                Lucy xxx



Text from Tom Jameson to Lucy Mandeville
Lovely Lucy, Thank you. Lol.
                    Tom
PS.  I took 5 for 41 today!

Facebook.
·        Lucy Mandeville and Tom Jameson are friends again.
·        Lucy’s Profile has changed back to “In a relationship”

August 2010: End of Second Week.

Text from Tom Jameson to Lucy Mandeville
Lucy darling, back on Sat. C U then.  Can’t wait! Lol.
                      Tom

Text from Lucy Mandeville to Tom Jameson
Am away till Mon.  Anna’s hen do!  Bad timing! C U then, Lol,
                 Lucy x

Text from Tom Jameson to Lucy Mandeville
Don’t think to tell me, will you!   The fuss U made about the tour! May be out Mon!        T.



Text from Lucy Mandeville to Tom Jameson
Wd have told U if U’d told me tour dates before U went!  1 hen do = 1 cricket tour?      Lucy x

Text from Tom Jameson to Lucy Mandeville
Quits! C U Mon. When will U be good?  Love U
                           Tom x

Text from Lucy Mandeville to Tom Jameson
Fool!
U mean home! 4ish. Drink in Masons?
                      Lol,  Lucy x
Sept 2010
Facebook.
·        Lucy Mandeville has changed her profile to “engaged”
·        Events: Lucy Mandeville will be attending her wedding to Tom Jameson on December 4. 
·        Wall: We will be honeymooning in Australia, where we hope to catch some Ashes cricket!